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Machine gun Toshoku (ソースを閲覧)

34 バイト追加、 2016年3月25日 (金)

弟は恐喝という概念でもなければ"it"でもないので全体的に翻訳文を修正

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-Someone post has made many to deny Toshoku identity that Toshoku had killed Toshoku's brother.<br>
+There has been many postings stating that Toshoku had killed Toshoku's brother, which disrespect Toshoku's identity.<br>
-Toshoku brother was name Atsushi.It was the younger brother of the one younger year old.Quarrel also it was, but it was irreplaceable brother.<br>
+Toshoku's brother's name was Atsushi. He was the brother one year younger than I am. We often had fights, but he was irreplaceable brother.<br>
-Brother, the local bad guys, was blackmailed, in the riverbed of the Tama River, committed suicide can not be said to parents the next day that was in the mob violence.<br>
+My brother, was blackmailed by the local bad guys, and committed suicide at the riverside of the Tama River the next day he was assaulted in groups, not even able to report it to his parents.<br>
-Brother is 16, I was that of 17.<br>
+My brother is 16, and I was 17.<br>
-I always have a younger brother is in.<br>
+My brother is always within me.<br>
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