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-CROSS LAW FIRM(法律事務所クロス)is a Japanese law firm.
+CROSS LAW FIRM(法律事務所クロス, ''hōritsu jimusho kurosu'') is a Japanese law firm.
 == Office Overview ==
-Law firm in which lawyers [[Takahiro Karasawa]] and [[Yamaoka Hiroaki]] was co-founded.<br>
+Law firm which lawyers [[Takahiro Karasawa]] and [[Yamaoka Hiroaki]] co-founded.<br>
-Business hours are 10: 00-20: 00, is a Sunday and a public holiday is fixed holiday.<br>
+It is open from 10:00 to 20:00, but is not open on Sundays and on public holidays.<br>
-Outside office hours corresponding by e-mail
 ==The contents of site==
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 *Photos and illustrations not in profile
 *App production company officer appointed
-*Last name(姓) wrongly written as sex(性)<ref>[https://archive.is/Vbdj2 source]</ref>
+*"Last name"(姓) wrongly written as "sex"(性)<ref>[https://archive.is/Vbdj2 source]</ref>
-*Gender box not radio button but check box (we are able to get dual gender!)
+*Gender box not radio button but check box (unintentionally enabling multiple genders)
-*Google map linked, but office does not exist in it<ref>[http://i.imgur.com/9O9JAOK.jpg image]</ref>
+*Linked to the Google map, but the office does not come up in the map<ref>[http://i.imgur.com/9O9JAOK.jpg image]</ref>
 *Design of webpage plagiarized from other<ref>[https://archive.is/h17B9 source]</ref>
 *texttexttexttexttexttext<ref>[https://archive.is/lC4Zj source]</ref>
-*Contact form does not correspond to the smartphone
+*Smartphone-unfriendly contact form
-*If you modify the URL of the top image high-quality logo appears that is not used anywhere<ref>[http://siomamire.pepper.jp/test/wp-content/uploads/2015/04/TOP02.jpg image]</ref>
+*If you modify the URL of the top image, an unused high-quality logo appears<ref>[http://siomamire.pepper.jp/test/wp-content/uploads/2015/04/TOP02.jpg image]</ref>
 *The user name is the real name in alphabetical
-*Attorneys' fees (legal consultation fee, launched gold, such as reward money) there is no description of the
+*No description of the attorneys' fees (legal consultation fee, launched gold, such as reward money)
-*Hard to read characters are thin
+*Light-colored characters, which makes it hard to read
 ==References==